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•June 10, 2009 • 23 Comments

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Soul Eater Chapter 66 – The Witch’s Research – Part A

•November 19, 2009 • 1 Comment

Welcome once again. This is Soul Eater Breakdown 66 let’s begin. Last chapter was the conclusion to the battle between Maka and her assassin. It was intense and we were give the three basics jealousy, suspense, and yes even heartbreak. The match finished with a new attack: Demon (Warlock) Hunter. Forced to retreat Gopher faced his maker (literally) as he bowed not only for his loss but a fail of emotional restraint after shouting Ebon’s true name all over the battlefield. As if batman himself Ebon interrupts his servant. Ebon also Noah refuses the apology and announce that a took suck as him is not award the conceit of having emotions. The conversation ends and Noah tells Gopher to get out. In wake and frown of this failure Gopher arrives at Kid’s cell. Kidd can already tell and one dnarky comment later the bard (Death Kid) has backed himself into a one sides fight. Alas it’s not a total loss. There are two referees at the side as Justin and Giriko listen the hallway. The scene switches to Medusa and  Crona (Chrona) in what appears to be the creations of something abominable (pornographic). Chapter 65 ends with a scream as Medusa informs her its time.

Previous Chapter: http://read.mangashare.com/Soul-Eater/chapter-065/page001.html

  • Maka vs. Gopher: Tables turned.
  • Gopher’s ball o’ hate: Jealousy.
  • Maka’s new attack: Demon Hunter.
  • The Ebon/Noah issue: Sidekick reveals idenity.
  • Gopher vs.  Death Kid: Prision fight.
  • Justin and Giriko: Bad taste.
  • Chrona’s reappearance: Porno.
  • Medusa’s Plan: Witch spider arrow snake ghost woman.

[Video: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8efsGR4Yj_4 (Part 1), http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NeY1SX-hXRk (Part 2)]

Chapter 66 opens with Spartoi’s first mission. Welcome to Africa our view arrives with the main group as we trail Fire, Thunder, Kilik and The Thompson sisters. Azusa introduces the mission outline over the channel. Team one will search for Medusa’s lab. Kilik is weapon meister, Fire and Thunder will act as close combat, while Liz and Patty are ranged. The objection is to locate the Witch’s research notes. As they conduct the investigation Azusa will relay visuals to Kim (Kimishi Dehiel) on standby. Kim will parse the witch lettering with Jacqueline from above. That’s it for the briefing. Fire and Thunder communicate with the ground to find the lab as Kilik and Liz are left to wonder over the marvels of the all-powerful incom/income (whaa?) which is apparently the equivalent of witchcraft. Fortunate shines as their loss in modern technology is cut short by a couple of pots in a game of patty cake.

>.<(The face says it all.)

A door’s under that sand and after a thunk a stairway opens underneath. Kilik congratulates the twins for their work and the mission begins. The team leads with a jam and Liz offers a pun.  This session won’t be caught at the trigger and after Kilik makes sure the room is clear the invitation continues downstairs. Azusa checks for traps and warms them not to rush to complete the mission. Kilik agrees however in that sweet sense of irony he walks right under an eye’s vision. There’s a creature staring however it seems to be lacking something, no don’t answer as eyeing from a distance a lone eyeball takes an endless peep. Clearly this thing wants a fight as Patty decides to make a staring contest out of it. Liz however turns away. Let it keep its identity. Kilik catches the joke but there’s a way before anyone is satisfied as it’s no match for Azusa nee-san when it comes to eyesight. Liz states Azusa’s an idol among gun types like her. Laughter aside Azusa continues to listen over the income and even through her flattery demands to continue the operation.

Aye thy be someone's eye alright.

After a reminder Team one enters a room with black liquid. Medusa’s research is here and Azusa asks Kilik to run his eyes across the area. The documents are written in Witch lettering and a series of text flies through the air as Azusa copies each one. After the last one its time to return and Azusa concludes the operation. There weren’t even any enemies and Kilik decides it was an easy mission. However underneath the blind of the screaming sun a set of figures say different. Meanwhile Azusa starts the analysis and connects her eyesight to Kim with the Senrigan. Kilik apologies for intruding back in town. He explains that they’re from Shibusen and the sentence trails off. Kim continues to read from the sky. She realizes something important as the text describes insanity, black blood, the kishin and Chrona. The scene returns to town as she explains that the reasearch is about magic to manipulate insanity. Patty comments on the eyes of the towns people. Liz states there’s something wrong here and the man in front pulls a gun. The battle opens as the Thompson sisters notice what Kilik hadn’t.

Them why their as normal as a... Holy smurfs!? Arms don't bend that way.

The bullet misses and almost certain a head shot is fatal Kilik takes his salvation behind a wall. Unfortunately in a like this (Resident Evil) there’s no time for thought and Azusa can hear as the shots penetrate the gate between here and the afterlife (Soul Society). Distanced from the obvious ruble Kilik explains the situation as he runs down the alleyway. At a crossroad’s he decides its time to return fire. The sisters set their phasers to stun however there’s a greater issue lurking around the corner.

Logic says zombie + weapon = Bad

Gurrilla warfare it sucks when your on the opposing team. A motovl cocktail later Frogger (You know damn well, you wouldn’t have made that jump.) decides the ground is too dangerous. Cursing all the way Kilik makes his path to the roof. Is it safe? Hahaha hell no. Now that the debate is finished. There is a weapon standing in the way and its saying thou shall not pass. Trust me popularity is a bad thing and one dive shot later Kilik rolls straight into an RPG (No not call of duty).

Fucked - When its coming you'll know.

Time for backup. They’re under heavy attack and after the explosion our frog jumps into an open window. Kim tries from above however she’s already under fire. Jacqueline tells her to evade as Azusa sets a rendezvous over the income. She activates her Senrigan and tells them to follow her instruct exactly.

This must be how Pacman feels.

You remember right? It’s a video game and your leading the main character down an escape route. Things look fine on the map but problem is your directions are bullshit. Well Azusa’s found a way around that. There a wall dead ahead and our maiden gives the only advise she can; smash it. Kilik breaks through with his rescue is on the other side. He grabs onto Jacquline and the group books it out of zombie hell.

Insurance - Just remember it doesn't cover witches (yet).

Kim finished her report and Spartoi lands by a tree outside of town. She explains to Kilik that they’ll quarantine the area and what happened in town was probably related to Medusa’s research to control insanity. There also was something written in her report about Chrona. Kim states that she might also be… but Liz interrupts and asks if there is anyway to return them to normal. However naturally any critical evidence is already messing and in this lack of hope Jacqueline states (high five for you) that maybe Black * Star’s team will have more luck.

I spy with my little eye.

So at the end they don’t know a thing. Regardless another venture awaits as another creature lurks underneath the water watching. The chapter ends as the enemy rises up from the lake. Born of Medusa introducing the black clown and his insanity.

Ah another recruit for the Buggy army.

That’s it for now. As usual suggestion as welcome complaints not. Reviews are offered at Mangahelpers for varying opinion and critque. With break here I have another chance to get caught up. Anyway please discuss below. Xth.

Chapter 67: http://www.onemanga.com/Soul_Eater/67/01/

Naruto Manga 472 Breakdown and 473 Spoiler Discussion: Samehada’s a whore + Is Bee a goner?!

•November 23, 2009 • 35 Comments

Hey everyone,

First off, sorry for the delay.  Had a few inconveniences with school/work.  Anyhow, let’s get to the review!  Being that this chapter was mainly focused on the Kisamehada and Killerbee fight, I’m going to run by a few things and offer my thoughts on the conclusion of this epic battle.  Shall we begin?  Credit to mistrel-fox for the pic.

Still trying to figure out how Sabu can talk underwater...smh

If you recall, Kisame had used his big wave explosion to create a colossal orb of water.  This take us to the panel above.  Sabu and Ponta are screwed because, like us, they can’t breathe underwater.  See, oxygen enters…I’m sure you all know by now T_T.  Anyhow, Killerbee’s attempts fail given that the water sphere moves along with Kisame as he swins making an escape almost impossible.

eh?

There’s a twist to this jutsu that took me a second to comprehend.  To the naked eye this jutsu may sound plausible, but then again, how does Kisame swim in a sphere that moves along with him?  They must be synchronized in a weird way.  Think about it before you start throwing kunais at me.  If you’re at the center of a body of water and you’re chasing someone using Kisamehada’s “water orb” jutsu.  If the space around you becomes water, how the hell do you swim in it?  Feel me?

WARNING: If you’ve lost me then move on. :D

Killerbee is a beast~

Killerbee is a Beast!~

Ok, let’s move on.  Killerbee’s approach to this inconvenient situation was to have Kisamehada follow him so that Ponta and Sabu would fall out of the water orb and into an oxygenated environment.  That fails…Kisamehada sprints for Ponta thus baiting Killerbee into his grasp.  As stated in the previous review, after fusing, Kisamehada can absorb chakra by simply touching his target.  Killerbee partially transforms, grabs Kisamehada, and sprints across the woods to remove Sabu and Ponta from the sphere.  Mission accomplished?  Not quite.

Honestly, I gain respect for Bee’s character as the plot rolls on.  He’s living up to the hype in my opinion.  Speaking of cool, wouldn’t it be cool if Naruto was able to pull out the Kyubi’s tails at will?  I immediately pictured a Naruto in sage mode with a couple of Rasengans and 9 little cute tails. XD

Woah wth is going on in there? I've heard stories XD

The ink played a part in the fight!  Credit to everyone who voted in that poll.  At this point, Killerbee is out of options.  Kisamehada has drained him of almost all his chakra so he tries to escape hence the ink.  My theory about the sharks didn’t quite come true but it was close.  Kisamehada relied on Samehada’s ability to detect chakra rather than using those shark sensors I spoke about in the previous review.  I don’t blame Kishi, I mean who the hell is gonna say, “oh, I have electroreception so your ink is no use!”  The Samehada explanation is more plausible in the context of the ninja world.

What gives!? You're my whore!

You know what happens next…Kisame reverts back to his previous form and captures an almost fully chakra drained Killerbee.  He then decides to cut his legs off for who the hell knows what reason.  What happens?  Samehada rejects him! DENIED!  The sword betrayed Kisame for Bee’s tasteful chakra.  Never saw that coming.  Apparently the sword has a mind of its own and its a whore for chakra.

Kisame kicks Samehada to the curb and proceeds to take Bee’s sword to kill him with it or so the panels imply.  For the sake of time, I’m going to move on to predictions.

There is no way Killerbee’s going to die this easily as many may have assumed.  Sabu and Ponta aren’t going to sit around and Samehada isn’t going to die from a kick.  One of them is bound to cause a distraction and lengthen the battle.  Just before Samehada was kicked, it managed to revive Bee with some chakra.  Kisame is screwed if that happens because he’s almost defenseless without Samehada.  If Killerbee regains most of chakra back, I’m honestly hoping he goes into his last form and lays the smackdown on Kisame.  What becomes of Samehada after the battle, who knows?  Maybe it’ll be completely destroyed or even fall into the wrong hands.  Suigetsu ring a bell?  All we know is that he won’t be coming back to Kisame.  And I’ll conclude with a message from our sponsors.

So yeah, sorry for the huge delay guys.  I’m a busy jerk, but I’ll be on full-time during Christmas vacation!  Until next time my fellow readers. :D

-ron “broken1i

Naruto Shippuuden 135 -136 Breakdown. The final confrontation begins!!!

•November 23, 2009 • 33 Comments

Hey everyone!

It’s Tenrai Senshi here back with this weeks anime breakdown and although it is a little bit late (I have been ill lately) I hope you will all forgive me.

Moving along, we finally get to what many would consider to be one of the most anticipated battles in the anime so far, so lets not waste any time and get straight to it!

Battle? What battle? First you have to watch me meditate, because I am coolness!!! X__X

Well, at least it was supposed to be the start of what is one of the most anticipated battles of all time, but sometimes life has a way of teasing us with the goods and making us wait with impatiently watering mouths before we can dig in.

And so we begin our epic confrontation with a more serene look at the past, in what is a considerably long flashback that takes up pretty much the entire first half of the episode.

Now, mind you, most of these scenes have been seen before at one time or another in the past, but this time they are treated to some enhanced visual flair, giving them that extra injection of awesomeness that makes watching it again far less a chore and more of a pleasure.

Hehehe... Annoying little brothers FTW!!! You can just see Itachi's loving it! ^ ^

It also helps that most of these scenes were a long way back, so having a memory refresh only seems logical considering the importance of the coming confrontation.

For the most part, we get a detailed look into the life of Itachi before the Uchiha massacre, including his relationship with his brother, which is highlighted throughout. Sometimes it is actually hard to believe that Itachi is only 13 years old at this time in the anime, because his demeanor and even his appearance betrays someone who appears far older than he actually is.

That image is only further enhanced by the upcoming events and it just shows you how much of Itachi’s own youth has been stripped away by the way of a shinobi.

A secret plot underlies the presence of a burdened heart as Itachi is given a choice that will forever engrave his fate in a cold and hardened stone.

Now, this is the part that really interested me in the flashback and it is also one scene we have never witnessed, in either the manga or the anime.

We see Itachi receiving counsel from an ANBU operative, who is clearly present to ensure that the young Uchiha is set for his coming ‘mission’. For those who have read the manga, we all know exactly what he is referring to, but what I found startling was that the evidence of Itachi’s true nature and circumstances is being hinted at already.

*Spoiler alert for non-manga readers*

This scene also places a lot more weight in the truth of Madara’s words to Sasuke further on regarding Konoha’s involvement in the Uchiha massacre and basically confirms them outright.

But what do you think?

It doesn't matter, I'll act cool now. I'm gonna kick all of your asses later anyway... <_<

Of course, life isn’t always a pretty canvas of colour and exuberance, especially in a flashback, and even with all of the good memories, there are still darker shadows yet hiding in the shattered remnants of one’s past.

One such stain on Itachi’s own memories is the death of his closest friend, Uchiha Shisui. Itachi is quickly suspected as a perpetrator in the events leading to his fellow Uchiha’s death, but he himself has little time for such an exchange.

What follows is a brief display of Itachi’s inner anger, which is only just barely quelled by his own brother’s pleas for him to stop. It makes you wonder if that hatred is a result of who Itachi is deep inside, or simply a consequence of the burden he is bearing.

Oooh! My eyes glow in the dark. O__O

After that, what follows is the night of the event we know all too much about as Itachi slaughters every last life in his clan.

The men, the women and the children, leaving his own parents for the very last.

No-one is left spared, not even the innocent. In a great act of remorseless destruction, Itachi slays them all one after the other.

Only one person is spared from the onslaught, only one anguished soul left to bear the burden of the death and hatred left behind in its wake.

But even that single soul is given no moment or reprieve as his heart is subjected to the torment and agony of his entire clan and even that of his own family.

Even Itachi's own brother is shown no pity and Sasuke is forced to endure the terrible nightmare of his clan's destruction and the death of his parents.

That pretty much sees a momentary conclusion in our lengthy flashbacks. I must say, that although it was rather long, it never felt unnecessarily drawn out and a lot of details are crammed into a reasonable amount of space, without becoming overwhelming.

It really did move along quite well.

After all of that, the real confrontation finally begins, as Sasuke and Itachi face off for a final showdown. Only this time, Sasuke is no longer fueled by hatred and vengeance alone and he has finally acquired the power he believes will see his brother’s end.

Two brother's clash in a duel of hatred and revenge. The halls now echo with the weary and bitter cries of their battle.

What I really enjoyed about this brief but very entertaining battle scene, was the animation style used. It was very fluid and a lot more expressive than what we have seen before so I am glad to see that the production was pumped up so nicely for such an important scene.

Although, it is not surprising considering the no doubt high expectations of all the fans… fans that could potentially riot and burn down your house if they are not pleased. X__X

Didn't mom tell you that you would poke someone's eye out with that thing?

I also laughed quite a bit when Itachi threw Sasuke around like he was nothing but a stuffed teddy bear.

He was obviously not to happy about that, though, because one quick Chidori later and a smooth evasion from Itachi, gave our vengeful youth the opening he needed to impale his brother with a deft blow.

Or, at least, that is what he thinks, but as we all know Itachi, what you see is never necessarily what you get.

Yo dude, you need to chill out man. Why the hate? Where is the love? (Now if he just pulled one of his fingers back down, it would be even funnier). ^ ^

And Itachi is digging his dark nail polish. <_<

*Ahem!*

Of course, Itachi is no longer the only one who has access to trickery and even Sasuke has become more aware of the fact that things would never be that easy to begin with.

Dammit, they never said that would happen in the manual for the lazyboy. >_<

Actually, this whole battle is literally more of a mind game than an actual confrontation, where the blows are inflicted to one’s psyche and the wounds are mental rather than physical.

It’s almost a consistent backwards and forwards trade, where either Itachi or Sasuke seem to be on top, before suddenly reversing positions. You just never know when one of them is landing a real blow or not.

But then again, with Itachi in a battle, what is real? ;)

“There is no spoon…”

Foxy goes BOOM!!!! In your face! :P

After that little bout, we go back to some flashbacks again, only this time Uchiha Madara is the subject of the day.

As Itachi explains the exulted Uchiha’s past, Sasuke himself remembers the words of the Kyuubi as shared between them during his encounter with Naruto.

Now, I am not going to go into great detail as to what was said, because by now you should have all seen the episodes, but I will say that they were certainly rich with a great deal of flashbacks and past references.

Are they a gift or a curse?

Eternal darkness is not cool, but scary monster eye thingies are so much better. :P

Now, this particular image also intrigued me as well.

For those who have read the manga further ahead, I would like to make a reference to the Juubi which was revealed to have existed as well as the dark presense we have seen inside Sasuke on more than one occasion.

This figure in the screen above seems to resemble both in a way, taking on a likeness of the shadow in Sasuke’s being as well as the ten-tailed beast itself. Now, the link I see to the Juubi is the tail like tendrils that are surrounding the figure.

If you look carefully, you can count ten, including the two that have gone somewhat off screen near the top of the head. Does anyone else think there is a connection, or am I just joining imaginary dots here?

Which eyes look the coolest of them all?

In any case, we get a nice look at Madara’s own Mangekyo sharingan as well as that of his brother’s, bringing our total tally up to six different types, if you include Madara’s EMS as well.

What I wanted to know, is which one you think is the coolest out of them all?

No, it isn't odd that we never run out of ammo. <_<

Flashbacks aside, we get back into the thick of things again, with Itachi and Sasuke once again exchanging blows, only this time things really start to get serious.

I enjoyed this shuriken battle scene quite a bit actually. It’s something you could only really appreciate in the anime, mostly because a scene like this wouldn’t be as easy to follow in the manga.

Moving further along, Itachi also reveals his intentions to take his brother’s eyes in order to stem the darkness that has already began to take a hold of his vision.

Let me take a look at that for you. O_o

And so our double episode finally comes to an end. I know the breakdown was a bit long, but I guess that’s what you get with a double episode.

However, the real action has only just begun. In all honesty, the battle as it has been shown so far is just an appetizer for the main course that’s on its way and if that’s anything to go by, it will definitely be a treat. ^ ^

The music and the animation really is great throughout both episodes and the production involved definitely had favorable results. We can only hope that it keeps up just as well through to the end.

Anyway, as a last thought, because I missed last weeks breakdown I will post the winner for the previous caption contest before that now.

Alec: “We drink for those who no longer can taste the world, watch for those who can no longer see the world, and wait for friends that never come to remember all the times they were there”

Well done to Alec for a deeper and more inspirational take on the caption entries.

And now for this weeks contest screen!

*Insert caption here*

You have no idea how lucky I was to just land that screen. Talk about good timing. X__X

I just couldn’t resist, so I hope you all have fun with this one. Other than that, here’s the preview for the next episode, something we can all look forward to.

See you again next time. ;)

Orihime in Hiding 8

•November 23, 2009 • 3 Comments

Chapter 8- Fashionably Late

By Thursday Leah knew there was something seriously wrong with her new friend’s taste buds. She and Meg had shared a cafeteria table with Orihime for the last few days, and the lunches had gotten stranger and stranger, even putting the cafeteria food to shame.

“I can’t believe you’re going to eat that,” Meg said, her face wrinkling in distaste as she viewed Orihime’s sack lunch.

Orihime smiled and held up the flour tortilla roll of pungent ingredients. “Would you like some? I brought enough to share?”

She had every other day, too, Leah had noticed.

“No,” Meg said cautiously. “What is it?”

Orihime considered the roll. “Peanut butter, olives, and raisins.”

Leah looked at the spot of red forming from the tortilla roll, dripping onto the lunch room table. They were the only ones left. The other three students who usually shared the table at lunch — Stephen, Michael, and Danielle — had escaped at the sight of Orihime’s Wednesday lunch.

Leah nodded. “It’s bleeding.”

“Oops,” Orihime said. “And pickled beets. Like umeboshi.” She wiped at the red spot with a napkin and tilted the tortilla roll horizontal.

Meg turned to one side as she tried to hide a gag reflex, covering her mouth with her hand.

Leah cleared her throat, leaning over the table closer to Orihime. “Who packs your lunches, Inoue?”

“I do.”

“Not Mrs. Smith?”

“No, me.” Orihime positioned her plastic container of layered rice before her, for lack of a proper bento box, and took the wrapper off her spork. “Mrs. Smisu shops a lot. Mr. Smisu is a businessman.”

Meg had recovered. “So, this is what you want to eat?”

Orihime nodded, opening the plastic container to reveal rice topped with grated radish and sesame seeds. “I tried making the kitchen divan at home last night, but it didn’t taste like what we made Tuesday in class.”

To Leah’s horror, Orihime topped the rice with the contents of a packet of ketchup. She had lost all interest in the taco salad she had intended to eat.

“But I used salmon instead of kitchen.”

Meg and Leah had learned that meant chicken.

“And the broccoli was tough-looking, so I used asparagus instead, and I accidentally bought cream of potato soup instead of chicken soup.”

Meg swallowed. “That’s a lot of insteads, Inoue.”

 Leah pushed away her salad. “Come over this Saturday and we’ll make one at my house,” she said to Orihime. She looked inquiringly to Meg, who was shaking her head.

“I’m babysitting,” the blonde girl said.

“Inoue? Can you?” Leah asked.

Orihime frowned for a moment. “I don’t know if I can. I don’t think so.” She brightened. “Why don’t you come over to my house? Our house. I don’t think Renji would mind.”

This got Meg’s attention. “Who’s Renji?”

Orihime was at a loss. What had they practiced on the plane? “He’s the brother. No, the son.”

Meg warmed to the subject. “How old?”

Leah nudged her with an elbow. “Geez, Meg, down girl.”

“Oh, I don’t know,” Orihime said. Actually, she didn’t know. Not really. “Older than me.”

“But he lives with his parents?” Leah asked, using the spork to pick through her salad.

“Yes.”

“You think it would be okay with the Smiths?”

Orihime scooped a big sporkful of rice. “I’ll ask them.”

 

At first Renji was dead set against visitors, but when the mention of cooking a non-Orihime meal came up, he reconsidered. With conditions.

He’d spent the last few days becoming familiar with the buildings around Brooklyn High School. It was situated next to a residential block of older homes, opposite the side road with a single tennis court and a tiny poorly-designed skate park which consisted of a flimsy-looking ramp and two rails. He’d seen it in use, and it had proved capable of bringing assorted freshman boys to their bloody knees on several occasions during lunch. The school dead-ended on its own short street near the bus garage by the teachers’ parking lot. All in all, it was a small complex, unspectacular in every way.

The attempted abduction at the junior high school thirty miles away was still on Renji’s mind, and had been since he’d read of it. Despite the newspaper writer’s promise for new details on the incident, none were forthcoming. Nothing.

He hadn’t told Orihime about it, but he did catch her looking through the newspaper one morning in the kitchen. She’d said she was looking at the Busch’s store sales paper, and maybe she was, but he’d rather her not know too much about the incident. No sense in making her more paranoid than necessary.

 

“What’s wrong with your neck?” he asked for the second time that evening as they sat in the living room. They were both on the brown sofa, which was directly opposite the television, with the green wing chair and love seat to either side. In one corner was a ficus tree — an imitation ficus tree of plastic, they had learned after Orihime had watered it. Twice.

She dropped her hand from the back of her neck, just below the hairline. “Oh, nothing.”

He watched her go back to painting her fingernails as he used the remote control to switch channels on the television. Nothing but hockey games, but they were starting to grow on him.

“Did you finish all your homework?” His nerves grated at the words. It sounded so human.

“Yes, except for the sonnet we have to write, but that’s not due until Monday.”

“What’s a sonnet?” He flicked to the next hockey game. It was playoffs, he’d learned, and according to the two games he’d partially seen already, there weren’t many rules — if any — in the sport. It appealed to him.

“A poem. We’re studying Shakespeare’s sonnets.” She blew gently on her pink fingernails.

Renji looked to the paperback book on the coffee table before them. Shakespeare was on the cover. Nearly as ugly as the guys on the money, he thought.

“You have to write a sonnet?”

“Yup.” She said the word quickly enough, but her eyes belied a pout.

He could only imagine who that would be about. He settled on a game on the television.

She looked up at it, her eyes following one of the player’s jerseys during a close-up camera shot. “Ooh, that looks like your hat.”

He nodded, searching the screen for the team names of the quarter final game. “Chicago Blackhawks. So that’s what that is.”

“Thanks for letting Leah come over this Sunday,” she said, shaking the bottle of nail polish to start on the other hand.

He nodded, intent on the game as a scuffle broke out and two players began circling each other on their skates. “Don’t you get enough cooking at school?” The players suddenly threw down their gloves and reached for each others’ jerseys. “You don’t have to cook, Inoue.”

“I like to cook.” She carefully drew the small brush of polish over a fingernail, leaning over the coffee table.

He shrugged. “What’re you going to make?” And do I have to eat it, he almost said, but didn’t.

“Basil and chicken rolls,” she said deliberately, smiling at getting the names right. “They made it in school already, but it was earlier this year.”

He nodded, watching the two players pummel each other on the ice, the black and white clad linesmen nearby, but not interfering. He felt a sudden flux in the spiritual fields and looked to the front door. The katana was close in its cloth case, stuck in the umbrella stand by the wing chair.

“Stay here,” he said, getting to his feet.

She watched him check the lock on the front door, peek through the small peep hole that was too high for her to reach, and then glance out the narrow window covered by a lace curtain by the door that allowed view of the porch. His eyes moved across the yard, fingers twisting the ring on his left hand, and then he went into the kitchen.

“I’m going out to look around, Orihime. Stay put.”

“I will,” she said lowly. She didn’t hear the back door open or close, and after a moment got up to look into the rear room.

The kitchen was empty.

 

Renji perched on the top of the highest rooftop in the neighborhood, relieved to be back in the black robes of a Soul Reaper. He searched the two lane road of Brooklyn-Pierport, but saw nothing amiss. A few cars, a man walking a dog in the growing dusk.

From his vantage point he could see farther into town, but there was no disturbance. In fact, the only ripple he’d felt earlier in spiritual energy had been minute, but it was still out of place in the void of Brooklyn.

He crossed town quickly, following the simple traipse of energy until he could pinpoint its strongest vein. The house looked like any other on the side street near the high school, two blocks from the center of town.

The spiritual tremor was fragile, flickering, and Renji alighted to an alley between two brick two-story homes divided by a chain link fence. Darkness had settled, thick and damp in the growing humid air. A low wheezing sound reached his ears, and he made his way to the house north of the fence from where the energy was radiating in slowly increasing ebbs.

He looked in the window at the man lying on the bed. He was old, well into his eighties in human years, dressed in pants and a shirt overly large and hanging on his thin form. Renji frowned, spotting a row of bottles of prescription medication on the nightstand beside the bed in the darkened room. The lamp wasn’t on, but he could see half a dozen small photos in various frames, most of the faces young, a few older.

The man gasped, his bony hands clutching the coverlet he had pulled over himself, eyes closed, his struggle to breathe growing more labored.

All those people, and he was going to die alone, Renji thought, watching the man. Where was his family?

He stepped from the window. He was quite sure the man’s imminent passing was what he’d sensed in the spiritual realm, but decided to look around town for a few moments. He’d only been gone two minutes. Orihime would be safe.

 

Leah looked fondly at the basil plant, and then sighed. “You’ve got three more, Ray. Sell me this one.”

Ray continued cutting up stew meat for the next day’s special in the prep room of the Manic Groove. Oven beef stew was one of the family restaurant’s specials, and Friday always brought out a crowd.

“What do you want with a lettuce-leaf basil plant, Leah?” he asked gruffly, his burly longshoreman exterior contradicting his finesse as head chef.

“I need it for a recipe.” She turned the container, admiring the fourteen inch-high herb of fragrant greenery. “I can’t get to the farmer’s market before Sunday, and I’m not working tomorrow or Saturday.” She looked to him, batting her green eyes at the middle-aged cook. To no avail.

“Who’re you making dinner for, huh? Got a fellow you’re trying to impress?” Ray chuckled, chopping up the beef deftly, adding the pieces to the six quart metal pan where a stack of meat was already waiting.

“No, but it’s for a good cause.” She glanced at the clock that read ten minutes past ten o’clock. Her legs ached. The dampness from the walk-in cooler had permeated her bare legs below her black capris, making her want to start the half mile walk home.

“Okay.”

“Really?”

“Yeah. Just don’t tell Connie.”

Leah nodded at the mention of the Manic Groove’s owner. “Deal. Thanks, Ray.”

“Don’t forget to pinch it off,” he called as she shucked her apron to reveal the standard attire for the restaurant, a tie-dye t-shirt, trimmed with matching fringe.

“I won’t.”

 

Renji didn’t stay to witness the dying man’s final breath. It wasn’t shinigami protocol to interfere, but neither did he want to watch. He spent several moments above the buildings closer to town, observing the merchants heading home, cats slinking in alleys…

He wondered briefly if Yoruichi Shihôin was among them. Not with the smells coming from those garbage cans, he thought, passing through to a secondary road leading away from town, at the verge of his half mile mark where a female form was walking, carrying a potted plant. After a moment he recognized her.

Cupcake.

Renji cringed. Cupcake? Egad. How ignoble. But it was the first thing he thought of when he saw her.

Well, maybe not the first thing, but one of the first.

He watched her until she crested the slight grade in the road and disappeared out of sight in the dark over the summit. It was too late to be walking alone down the road. Few houses were planted on either side of the road, as cornfields hinged on the outskirts of town.

He turned back to town, flash stepping to the dying man’s house in time to see the frail whisper of a soul ascend the sky above. It was a mournful, weary form, barely discernible.

Renji looked in the bedroom window at the corpse. Still alone.

No one should have to die alone, even in America, he thought. He slipped off the ring and put it on his left hand, and then used his elbow to break the glass in the window pane, and threw a rock from the fence weeds at the darkened brick house next door over. A light came on in an upstairs window.

When he got back home — yes, he had to admit, home — Orihime was still on the couch where he’d left her five minutes ago.

Fingernails and toenails all painted pink.

 

“They’re needles.”

The baggage inspector looked at the slender, dark-haired youth opposite the airport check counter.

“Sewing needles,” Uryû Ishida clarified. “It’s a sewing kit.”

The heavyset inspector held up the kit, thumbing through it with big meaty hands, her skeptical examination expecting contraband with every movement. “You a tailor or something?” she asked, shifting her considerable weight to each foot.

“I’m a student, and yes, sewing is a passion of mine.” Ishida wished he could have studied up on his English before taking the impromptu trip across the ocean. It hadn’t entirely been his choice, but there had been no denying the hair pins and set of numbers left for him in his glasses case three days ago.

The inspector looked at the growing line of passengers behind the Japanese youth. She slid his bags to him across the counter. “Okay. You can go.”

“Thank you.”

He repacked his bags further down the counter. No one had seen who delivered the hairpins at school. There had been few whom he could question about it, and most of them had become scarce.

He stuffed the last of his clothes in the bag and zipped the bag shut. Orihime had disappeared ten days ago, and he had his suspicions that Soul Society was behind it. That hadn’t bothered him too much.

But when Karin and Yuzu Kurosaki had come up missing — well, that was odd.

Even Tatsuki had been acting a little off lately, but Ishida thought that was because Orihime was absent.

Against his better judgment Ishida had paid a visit to the Kisuke Urahara shop. Urahara had been no help.

Well, a little help, Ishida decided as he gathered his two bags and headed for the exit of the airport, and to an unknown destination.

“Longitude and latitude,” Urahara had said, smiling that sneaky smile of his, peeking out from his striped hat. “That’s all I know.” He pointed at the last number that was circled. “No clue what the fourteen means.”

Ishida made his way to the line of taxis waiting outside the airport, then looked to the row of public transportation at the end of the curb.

Detroit smelled bad and it was noisy, he decided, heading for the blue and white double-decker buses.

There were few who would have left the hairpins and set of geographical coordinates. Considering that Orihime had returned from Hueco Mundo without her hairpins, he felt safe to assume that whoever had delivered them was also from there.

And from Aizen.

But why him? Why a Quincy?

Perhaps a sympathetic member of Aizen’s minions. Perhaps an Espada. Perhaps Ulquiorra. Perhaps someone with a kindly bend toward Soul Society.

Someone high-ranking, Ishida thought as he looked at the destinations listed on the buses.

Perhaps Aizen had a traitor in his midst.     

 

One Piece Chapter 564 Breakdown And Discussion + 565 Spoiler Prediction! New Demotivational Poster Included! $_$

•November 20, 2009 • 15 Comments

-One Piece Chapter 564 Breakdown Below-

YOSH!!! Welcome back to another One Piece Chapter Breakdown WRA style! This week long break was a killer but believe me when I say Oda is working hard to make up for it. Personally this chapter was great but not as epic as I thought it would be. A lot of Whitebeard action and a lot of talking, but nothing besides that. I’ll get into all that with the breakdown so let’s hop to it!

I just had to add an extra video in here and it’s the new opening to the anime for those who haven’t seen it. Watch it 3 or more times and you’ll love it! It makes me feel so happy inside. ^_^

Here’s this week’s AMV and BOPP!

Anyone who’s read/watched the full One Piece adventure up until now will love that AMV. Great animation and synced to one of my favorite bands. I suggest watching the AMV at GoldEevee’s channel for a bigger screen to do it justice. BOPP by LadySwallow… Classic scene pervy name. @_@

Now on to the breakdown!

WTH, where's Franky!? All I see is a crab and a sweet turtle with a gun barrel attached to it's back! -_-

Judging from the snow outside the window I assume Franky’s still stranded on Karakuri Island. I don’t see any modifications on the outside of him but that’s good to see he’s the same ol’ Franky we know and love. Lol, playing with that crab…or hermit…or whatever the hell it is. >_< Here’s hoping that he got some upgrades on the inside of him though! *crosses fingers*

I wonder if Whitebeard knows how hard it is to get blood out of whites. >_<

Over in the main story Whitebeard is finally on the move and the pirates are riled up. Once your leader takes the initiative to go into battle you best believe it’s all or nothing. GUNG HO, let’s clear the path and give Whitebeard a beautiful battle to die in!

Not even Oda can save you now Squardo! T_T

Now this entire discussion involving Squardo strikes me as obvious foreshadowing. First the pirates say Squardo must feel terrible shame for being tricked by the marines and even going as far as stabbing the old man. In fact the pirate says, “There can be no greater shame!!” Squardo is obviously feeling the pressure now and no matter how admirable the pirates are for being angrier at the marines than they are at Squardo, I don’t think Squardo can forgive himself. He’s crying his eyes out and cursing the day he was born, now just look at that ominous look on Marco’s face! When he tells him to stop crying he’s hinting he has to make up for his wrong…anyway possible. Remember it was Marco who pounced on Squardo so he’s none too pleased with him. I think Sqaurdo’s about to go on a suicidal mission and Marco is pushing the agenda. Maybe I’m just over thinking it and see the worse in pirates. What do you all think?

He'd kick ass in a arm wrestling contest! No...he'd slam hands would be more accurate...>_>

So we move on to Luffy and the gang but they’re not really doing much but talking and running. See how I said this chapter mainly focuses on Whitebeard action? Whitebeard encounters John Giant and moves him out of the way like an annoying insect. How he goes about doing so is really beyond comprehension. After he blocks the giant’s sword with one arm at some point he lays down his weapon (did Oda get lazy here?)  and puts his Gura Gura no Mi fruit into overdrive. This…OLD MAN tilts not only the entire island of Marineford but the sea itself!

Don't tilt to much or you'll break the damn game! O_O

HOLY SHIT!!! This panel was definitely the highlight of the chapter for me. That power is insane! If he had this couldn’t he have just sunk Roger’s ships without even coming near him? He should have been able to kill Roger easily with this kind of power. I guess that would be a cowardice move though and not a real man’s fight.

That has to be an indication of clear prejudice against the Giant race. o_O

Awwww, Boa is worried about Luffy again. ^_^ Why doesn’t she just tie the man up and take away his innocence? Lol, no one would know he’s missing anyway it’s not like he’s doing anything important right now. -_- Ja, I’ll get that later too. ;) So Whitebeard goes on to defeat John Giant by sending a quake though his body and that makes me think why does Whitebeard hate giants so much? You all noticed to right? Whitebeard has been kicking Giant ass throughout this entire war. He is really big for a human…maybe he’s half giant and papa giant abandoned him when he was a baby or something. o_O

There you go. Shittiest photoshop I've ever done but add a few lightsabers and lighting bolts and what do you get? >_<

Now here’s the worst part of the chapter for me. The quake that was directed through John Giant’s body is headed towards the execution platform and what happens? It’s stopped! Now that’s not what gets to me it’s just how it’s stopped. No explanation just stick your hands out and voila! You combined your three powers to stop a quake in midair!? WTH, just happened there!? THE FORCE! That’s what happened… but I’m sure it was Haki or a mystery as Luffy would explain it. Something that will be revealed later in the manga I suppose to give reason to why Whitebeard couldn’t just quake all of his strong non-logia type opponents to death.

Looks like Whitebeard's the protagonist now.

Back to Luffy again and all he’s doing is panting and bleeding out. The poor guy looks really hurt actually. He’s been Death Winked, smacked around by Smoker, light kicked, slashed by Mihawk, and etc… I understand why he’s so hurt he just came from Impel Down after all and he’s basically running on hormones and will power alone. He’s fighting opponents at full strength and some like the admirals are on a completely different level. Bah, but it still hurts me to see Luffy so…useless in this battle. It pains me to say it but the greatest accomplishment he’s achieved so far was take down 1 Giant and that took Gear 3rd. He can’t even get up the mobilizing wall! >_< Maybe you guys are more lenient…

Fisting and teabagging jokes. Don't look at me Oda came up with the pictures he's sneaking the hidden jokes in, you just gotta look closely! o_@

Yeah, the wall is erected through the thick ice but not fully because Oar’s is playing bloody paperweight. Unintentionally he’s helping out his nakama by…being dead? Nah, he’s not dead. Tis’ just a flesh wound says the Whitebeard hopefuls. ;) Well, the marines can’t get up the wall but that’s not going to stop them from initiating the final step of their plan. With the pirates trapped inside the encircling wall Sengoku orders Akainu to deliver a fatal blow. A storm of fiery meteors shaped into fists to melt the ice under the pirates. Now that’s clever and dirty as hell. Touché Sengoku. :P

That ends this chapter and now getting back to what I said in the first paragraph. A lot of Whitebeard action and a lot of talking was what this chapter mainly focused on. It’s no surprise though that they want to focus on Whitebeard, displaying so much of his power, since he’s going to die in this war. If he doesn’t die I’ll be highly disappointed but you all can shoot me down for it, all you Whitebeard hopefuls out there. XD Luffy was basically put in the background this chapter and everything was put on hold to let Whitebeard shine. The only other bit of action we got was the last panel with Akainu which was nice. Could have been better in my opinion after a week off but that’s just me. Let me know what you all think of this return chapter!

NEXT WEEK CHAPTER 0 AND CHAPTER 565!!! Chapter 0 displays the world of One Piece 20 years ago! YOSH GO ODA!!! ^(0_0)^ Here’s this week’s demotivational poster and prediction contest. Comment, predict, and enjoy! :D

Artwork by Diabolumberto

Prediction Contest And My Prediction

Alright I was a little off last week…*cough* but I’ll make up for it, I hope, this week. Whitebeard will save the day by quaking the air above them and minimizing Akainu’s meteor’s by reducing their size. Squardo will sacrifice himself for Whitebeard’s advancement to save Ace. This action will only stir the pirates on and make them push harder. Whitebeard will quake the encircling wall making a hole for the pirates to charge through. The marines planning for this will send in the admirals to finish off Whitebeard as he recovers and prep Ace for execution before he can be retrieved. Luffy surprises us this chapter? o_O